Today we wrote recounts. A recount tells about something that has happened. We are trying to include: who, what, when, where and why in our stories. We also try to write how we feel as well. Check out these photos of us sharing our stories with each other, then enjoy reading these recounts.
Last week I went tramping at Lake Daniels. I went across a rope bridge. It was bouncy. I went fishing. I ate a tadpole and a huhu grub. Then I went hand fishing. Dad fell in the water with his noodles. Then is was bedtime. The next morning I went surfing with Dad. There weren't any life guards. I fell off my surf board.
By Ruaridh
Last Tuesday I played rugby at the park. The people in my team are Amelia, Libby and me as well as some other people. One of the coaches was sick so my brother and his friend, James, had to coach. I didn't like that.
By Isobel
On Saturday I went to Korean School because I need to learn some more Korean words. I came from Korea when I was six years old. When I go to Korean School I do art classes and maths classes. It is a lot of fun. I start at 10 o'clock and finish at 4 o'clock.
By Won Jeong
I went to Neve's house and we went to Jellie Park. It was really fun. Neve did the mermaid jump and then we went on the hydroslide. Then we watched people jump off the diving board. A big man jumped off the diving board and made a big splash. The splash went up to the lamppost and splashed Neve and me.
By Elspeth
Wow... great recounts Ruaridh,Isobel, Won Jeong and Elspeth! I loved reading your excerpts.
ReplyDeleteI don't like the sound of eating a tadpole and huhu grub though Ruaridh! Have you been watching Bear Grylls? Ha, ha. Rugby, swimming and Korean school sound like fun though! Hope you all have a lovely day in class.
Erins mum. x